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Thursday, April 2, 2015

B is for Balance

Pardon the swearing. The sentiment fit.
Boistrous bullies bragged belligerently about beating up on Little Ben Brown, but Ben bravely bellowed. Bugs and bees buzzed. Birds brandished beaks. Beasts bounded, and suddenly Ben had backup. A bear bounced a ball, baring big teeth. A boar brayed, “Baratheon!” A baboon belted boulders. And an itty bitty bunny rabbit nibbled at a bloody pile of bones. The Bully boys backed away bowing because beastly brethren balance brutality.

[A Drabble is a story told in exactly 100 words]

Beast of Caer Bannog Video if you care to watch.

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17 comments:

  1. Jan MorrisonApril 2, 2015 at 5:56 AM

    Yes! I can see it.

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  2. Tess Julia April 2, 2015 at 8:35 AM

    Ok! I seriously love that picture :)

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  3. L. Diane WolfeApril 2, 2015 at 9:05 AM

    No one is messing with Ben.

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  4. T. Powell ColtrinApril 2, 2015 at 9:11 AM

    Love the drabble. Powerful AND meaningful.

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  5. Matthew MacNishApril 2, 2015 at 9:44 AM

    The sentence, "Buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo buffalo," is actually grammatically correct. Isn't that weird?

    2015 A to Z Challenge Co-Host
    Matthew MacNish from The QQQE

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  6. Alex J. CavanaughApril 2, 2015 at 11:14 AM

    Awesome - you included the rabbit from Monty Python and the Holy Grail!

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  7. S. L. HennessyApril 2, 2015 at 11:41 AM

    Wow, that was amazingly impressive. And that photo KILLS me.

    Good luck with the 2015 A to Z Challenge!
    A to Z Co-Host S. L. Hennessy
    http://pensuasion.blogspot.com

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  8. Tamara NarayanApril 2, 2015 at 12:11 PM

    Boy, that's a bunch of B-words. Crazy fun and that picture is priceless.

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  9. MelanieApril 2, 2015 at 12:20 PM

    You're having way too much fun with your words. Love your selection of B words!

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  10. Oregon Gifts of Comfort and JoyApril 2, 2015 at 1:05 PM

    I love it! I know that I am going to enjoy your alliteration Drabbles this month!

    Hugs,
    Kathy M.

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  11. RaShelle WorkmanApril 2, 2015 at 3:09 PM

    Fantastic, Hart! =D Totally rocks.

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  12. CherdoApril 2, 2015 at 3:18 PM

    Love it! But the picture is pure awesomeness.

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  13. CherdoApril 2, 2015 at 3:18 PM

    Love it! But the picture is pure awesomeness.

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  14. Arlee BirdApril 2, 2015 at 4:16 PM

    What have you taken on, girl! Your K, Q, X and Z posts should be quite a challenge. In fact all the letters are going to something to behold. Talk about taking on a Challenge and turning it into a bigger challenge!

    You did well with B.

    Arlee Bird
    A to Z Challenge Co-host
    Wrote By Rote

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  15. HelenaApril 2, 2015 at 6:29 PM

    Beautiful! And the picture is bodacious.

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  16. Susan Gourley/KelleyApril 2, 2015 at 9:42 PM

    That was an amazing creative expression. I'm so impressed and it was fun. The picture is perfect.

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  17. Melissa SugarApril 2, 2015 at 11:16 PM

    I am blown away, I mean super impressed. How do you do it? So many letter B words and they all work together to form a perfect and interesting piece of flash fiction. I've always admired writers who can produce quality flash fiction, but you take it to another level. I am amazed that you could take all those letter B words and produce a cohesive story that I enjoyed reading. That is creativity.. Well done.

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